my persuasive writing about the croesus track

In my opinion I strongly disagree that the great walk should not be open to the public because. I feel that there might be more accidents. Because people can go off the track and might fall into a mineshaft. It will be slippery people will slip and fall and they can possibly break a bone.

Secondly there will be more pollution from rubbish and petrol fumes. The petrol from cars pollute the air and the more people means more pollution. The rubbish lots of people have rubbish in their car and they throw it out the window also people will throw rubbish onto the track. Get people to care for our environment.

Lastly there will be more traffic and more people on the track. The more people on the track means the people who want to ride their bikes they can't because there are lots of people on the track. On the road there will be lots of cars they will take all the spaces in the car park. To much traffic means we have to fix the roads more often and it will take ages.