Wednesday 3 July 2019

my spooky house persuasive writing

In my opinion i would live in the spooky mansion because. It is spooky.it has a great view of the ocean and there are dolphins swimming in the water. And you can go swimming in the sea.

You can go sailing and go fishing on the boat. And there are no neighbors that can't make noise complaints and cant get you arrested. And there is no noise. No police. No pollution. No people.

It can be a great place to play paintball and laser tag. Since no one can stop you from playing it will be fun i'm telling you. Even though you have no power or wifi it is still fine without power.

In conclusion you should live in a house that you want to live in. by Ahi

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Ahi,
    I found it very interesting that when I got your email I could open the link to spooky.it yet it can't open on the blog. What do you think the problem might be? It's nice to see that you are blogging regularly. Miss B

    ReplyDelete

Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.