Wednesday, 15 April 2020

my family peom

Family poem
The first people to know you
The ones that gave you your name 
They give you love and a place to belong
Where it all started the root of which you came from 
Cherish your family whilst you still have them

And when they are gone it is never the same.

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3 comments:

  1. Miss B (Principal)15 April 2020 at 16:24

    Hi Ahi,
    Fantastic poetry Ahi!! Your poem has heart and thought combined in what you wrote.
    Ka pai

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  2. Sue Gibson16 April 2020 at 10:20

    I agree with Miss B, especially the word cherish!

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  3. Anonymous21 April 2020 at 21:43

    Hi Ahi, what a lovely poem! So nice when we can appreciate the good things family can give us.

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