We are learning to write to describe a moment in time.
At Night the dogs snuck out the back door, then they meet
up on the lawn.
They started running down to the beach,
Doge is a big golden labrador with a very cute face.
Omega was way different because he was a tiny chihuahua
that loved to bark.
Doge was going to destroy the whole beach and
Omega told Doge that they would get in trouble.
Then Doge was like ‘then let’s go get tacos then’
Omega was like “okay let’s get tacos”
“cool” said Doge “we’re going to get taco bombs”
Omega was like.”no we’re not going to get them now okay”
“Well no bombs” said Doge.”
Doge you know i got a day off” said omega
“i had a day off as well yay” said Omega
“let’s swim” said doge “
yeah let’s swim” said omega “
it sure is cold now”
“yeah let's go home now i'm freezing” said doge
At Night the dogs snuck out the back door, then they meet
up on the lawn.
They started running down to the beach,
Doge is a big golden labrador with a very cute face.
Omega was way different because he was a tiny chihuahua
that loved to bark.
Doge was going to destroy the whole beach and
Omega told Doge that they would get in trouble.
Then Doge was like ‘then let’s go get tacos then’
Omega was like “okay let’s get tacos”
“cool” said Doge “we’re going to get taco bombs”
Omega was like.”no we’re not going to get them now okay”
“Well no bombs” said Doge.”
Doge you know i got a day off” said omega
“i had a day off as well yay” said Omega
“let’s swim” said doge “
yeah let’s swim” said omega “
it sure is cold now”
“yeah let's go home now i'm freezing” said doge
THE END
Amazing Ahi, your first line shows rather than tells the attitude and friendship between the two dogs. You also crafted the sentence well - it is a compound sentence with the connective word "then". Well done.
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DeleteHi Ahi, my name is Breeze I go to Red hill school. I like your dog story post. It sounds really cool and sounds fun. I wish I was there. Probably you could add a background next time but other then that it is really cool. Thanks for posting.
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