my persuasive writing about the croesus track

In my opinion I strongly disagree that the great walk should not be open to the public because. I feel that there might be more accidents. Because people can go off the track and might fall into a mineshaft. It will be slippery people will slip and fall and they can possibly break a bone.

Secondly there will be more pollution from rubbish and petrol fumes. The petrol from cars pollute the air and the more people means more pollution. The rubbish lots of people have rubbish in their car and they throw it out the window also people will throw rubbish onto the track. Get people to care for our environment.

Lastly there will be more traffic and more people on the track. The more people on the track means the people who want to ride their bikes they can't because there are lots of people on the track. On the road there will be lots of cars they will take all the spaces in the car park. To much traffic means we have to fix the roads more often and it will take ages.

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flight

we had to write how flight works

doge and omega

We are learning to write to describe a moment in time.



At Night the dogs snuck out the back door, then they meet
up on the lawn.
They started running down to the beach,
Doge is a big golden labrador with a very cute face.
Omega was way different because he was a tiny chihuahua
that loved to bark.
Doge was going to destroy the whole beach and
Omega told Doge that they would get in trouble.
Then Doge was like ‘then let’s go get tacos then’
Omega was like “okay let’s get tacos”
“cool” said Doge “we’re going to get taco bombs”
Omega was like.”no we’re not going to get them now okay”
“Well no bombs” said Doge.”
Doge you know i got a day off” said omega
“i had a day off as well yay” said Omega
“let’s swim” said doge “
yeah let’s swim” said omega “
it sure is cold now”
“yeah let's go home now i'm freezing” said doge

                           THE END