flowey the crocodile

at school we have been writing about our holidays and here is mine

my spooky house persuasive writing

In my opinion i would live in the spooky mansion because. It is spooky.it has a great view of the ocean and there are dolphins swimming in the water. And you can go swimming in the sea.

You can go sailing and go fishing on the boat. And there are no neighbors that can't make noise complaints and cant get you arrested. And there is no noise. No police. No pollution. No people.

It can be a great place to play paintball and laser tag. Since no one can stop you from playing it will be fun i'm telling you. Even though you have no power or wifi it is still fine without power.

In conclusion you should live in a house that you want to live in. by Ahi

my persuasive writing about the croesus track

In my opinion I strongly disagree that the great walk should not be open to the public because. I feel that there might be more accidents. Because people can go off the track and might fall into a mineshaft. It will be slippery people will slip and fall and they can possibly break a bone.

Secondly there will be more pollution from rubbish and petrol fumes. The petrol from cars pollute the air and the more people means more pollution. The rubbish lots of people have rubbish in their car and they throw it out the window also people will throw rubbish onto the track. Get people to care for our environment.

Lastly there will be more traffic and more people on the track. The more people on the track means the people who want to ride their bikes they can't because there are lots of people on the track. On the road there will be lots of cars they will take all the spaces in the car park. To much traffic means we have to fix the roads more often and it will take ages.